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Originally Posted by Demona
I just don’t understand why they didn’t just have Maxwell Lord be comic Maxwell with his powers. Then they could have had Barbara find the artifact that gave her the god powers. No ridiculous, painful, convoluted “wish” plot.
Does anybody read these scripts before they are approved bc I want to know who thought this was great. It’s pretty damn bad.
And that f**king invisible jet scene. Ugh. Painful. The funniest part was my husband saying “That plane wouldn’t even make it across the Atlantic, let alone to Egypt. It doesn’t hold that much fuel.”
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Even if you ignore the logistics issues (payphone in Cairo calling back to DC in the 80s) of how fast they fly there and back on a somehow fully fueled jet by someone with 60 year old outdated pilot knowledge my biggest issue is basic writing of set up and pay off.
Good method.
Set up. Time. Problem. Pay off.
Bad Method.
Problem. No time. Set up. Pay off.
Diana knew stealing the plane was an issue and they would have radar. So, the plan was to use this "pulled this out of my butt" magic power that she can turn objects invisible?? Inserting a story element, and then ignoring it the rest of the film (I'd be shocked if it was back in the third film as well).
I'm not asking for award winning writing, but this is basic stuff. Simplify your elements and focus and think through the story to make it flow to avoid having to pull these cheap short cuts (shocking, the film actual nature defies its own message!!!)