Sweet
thanks for the pics
The first one is cypher I assume.
While the second one is awesome and blood angels are my favorite chapter it would be way cooler if the dreadnaught was actually in combat, like pulping some tyranids or something. If not I would definitely replace the servitor with a techmarine. There are servitors that will do work on the dreads of course, and chapter serfs too but waking a dreadnought is very difficult and pretty sacred for the marines. A techpriest would be present for something like opening up the sarcophagus, waking, or pretty much anything tbh.
Also iirc the astartes in the dread sarcophagus aren't just wounded but they also remove his remaining appendages when entombing them so he wouldn't have an arm, I'll try confirm with 40klore but I would def run it by GW to make sure it's lore accurate. I believe it should just be a head and torso. the torso as well even a bit cutdown, and probably pretty wasted away.
edit: also I can't really see but there should still be flame throwers under each arm as well and it doesn't look like they are there.
2nd edit:
not my mini but way cooler pose imo :P